Script Adjustments

 I'm nearing the end of my pre-production, and I'm in the process of finding an acting crew and getting props for my film. But for this blog, I want to point out somethings in my script that's a bit different from the rough draft. Here's a side-by-side comparison:

OLD SCRIPT


I'm still trying to figure out a scene opening transition for the script, whether it should be a dissolve or a fade in, but my and my partner will come to conclusion on that.

NEW SCRIPT


 I made some subtle adjustments to the first scene like making a flashback in the first scene and putting editing notes in parenthesis. It's still all a work in progress, but the dialogue has changed a bit due to the 2:00 time limit. There are a few errors in the script but as said before it's a work in progress.

In my next blog, I'll be creating an "article" for my film titles "What Really Happened at Lauderhill 6-12". This next blog is technically a prop that will be used in my film.

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